no inspiration to continue this poem....

• starblue

  19 May 05, 11:14

  xiang3 yao4 ai4 jiu4 dei3 xian1 xue2 hui4 fang4 xia4
  bie2 deng3 dao4 xin1 sui4 cai2 le4 ma3 xuan2 ya2
  jiang1 ai4 tuo1 kou3 er2 chu1 de gao4 su4 ta1
  ni3 jiu4 zhi3 neng2 chi1 chi1 deng3 ta1 hui2 da2
  
• the.raven

  19 May 05, 11:16

  bie2 ignore ren2 yao4 bu4 ran2 ni3 jiu4 shi4 n00b.
• Werewolf

  19 May 05, 11:21

  Originally posted by the.raven:

  bie2 ignore ren2 yao4 bu4 ran2 ni3 jiu4 shi4 n00b.

  3l33t
• rainee

  19 May 05, 11:23

  wa chinese poem I don't know how to continue, if it is in English, I might be able to help
• LazerLordz

  19 May 05, 11:23

  Lai2 DPS dissect ni3 de4 si1 hao2 ma1?
• BabyLover

  19 May 05, 11:24

  Originally posted by starblue:

  xiang3 yao4 ai4 jiu4 dei3 xian1 xue2 hui4 fang4 xia4
  bie2 deng3 dao4 xin1 sui4 cai2 le4 ma3 xuan2 ya2jiang1 ai4 tuo1 kou3 er2 chu1 de gao4 su4 ta1
  ni3 jiu4 zhi3 neng2 chi1 chi1 deng3 ta1 hui2 da2
  

  wats the mean ah.. ma xuan ya?
• starblue

  19 May 05, 11:25

  Originally posted by Werewolf:

  3l33t

  wad's that??
  
  no lah... i'm ignoring raven cos he posted rubbish last time... when i ignore people i ignore them for about 3 days de lah... so you ignore wad he say lah... help me complete my poem leh.. give me some content to write into the poem leh....
• the.raven

  19 May 05, 11:27

  Originally posted by starblue:

  wad's that??
  
  no lah... i'm ignoring raven cos he posted rubbish last time... when i ignore people i ignore them for about 3 days de lah... so you ignore wad he say lah... help me complete my poem leh.. give me some content to write into the poem leh....

  he is saying that I am elite, n00b.
  
  so after 3 days u will stop ignoring la. you say one ok.
• Kenashi

  19 May 05, 11:29

  Originally posted by starblue:

  xiang3 yao4 ai4 jiu4 dei3 xian1 xue2 hui4 fang4 xia4
  bie2 deng3 dao4 xin1 sui4 cai2 le4 ma3 xuan2 ya2
  jiang1 ai4 tuo1 kou3 er2 chu1 de gao4 su4 ta1
  ni3 jiu4 zhi3 neng2 chi1 chi1 deng3 ta1 hui2 da2
  

  
  should this "le4 ma3 xuan2 ya2" be "xuan2 ya2 le4 ma3" ??
• hyuuga neji

  19 May 05, 11:36

  i dun understand at all...
  cannot help...
  
• starblue

  19 May 05, 11:43

  Originally posted by Kenashi:

  
  should this "le4 ma3 xuan2 ya2" be "xuan2 ya2 le4 ma3" ??

  yes... the correct one is xuan ya le ma.. but in a poem i can write le ma xuan ya to mean the same thng, and to mke the poam rhyme.
• Kenashi

  19 May 05, 11:46

  Originally posted by starblue:

  yes... the correct one is xuan ya le ma.. but in a poem i can write le ma xuan ya to mean the same thng, and to mke the poam rhyme.

  icic
• starblue

  19 May 05, 11:50

  Originally posted by Kenashi:

  icic

  so any help for my poem??? how come nobody got help me de???
  
  okok, any comments on my poem so far???
• hyuuga neji

  19 May 05, 12:09

  Originally posted by starblue:

  so any help for my poem??? how come nobody got help me de???
  
  okok, any comments on my poem so far???

  chinese language is my killer subject...
  how to comment if i dun understand...
  
• the.raven

  19 May 05, 12:41

  Originally posted by hyuuga neji:

  chinese language is my killer subject...
  how to comment if i dun understand...
  

  I got A1 in higher chinese, I am uber |337
• hyuuga neji

  19 May 05, 13:00

  Originally posted by the.raven:

  I got A1 in higher chinese, I am uber |337

  then you help lor...
• the.raven

  19 May 05, 13:35

  Originally posted by hyuuga neji:

  then you help lor...

  but she ignore, how to help
• DeadPoet

  19 May 05, 14:26

  Originally posted by starblue:

  so any help for my poem??? how come nobody got help me de???
  
  okok, any comments on my poem so far???

  Maybe you can get some helps/comments from this site.
• Kenashi

  19 May 05, 14:41

  yi tian yi tian de guo qiu, zhuan yan you yi nian
  da fu zhong shi zhan yao yuan de ming tian
  
  Hope it helps
• starblue

  20 May 05, 07:58

  Originally posted by Kenashi:

  yi tian yi tian de guo qiu, zhuan yan you yi nian
  da fu zhong shi zhan yao yuan de ming tian
  
  Hope it helps

  er... doesn't make sense to me.. please add in the 4 tone can??? and check your han yu pin yin correct of not... guo qiu should be guo qu.....
• starblue

  20 May 05, 08:21

  next line:
  
  yi4 qi3 shou3 qian1 shou3 kan4 xi1 yang2 xi1 xia4
  
  then stuck again....
• Kenashi

  20 May 05, 08:57

  Originally posted by Kenashi:

  yi tian yi tian de guo qu, zhuan yan you yi nian
  ta fu zhong shi zhan yao yuan de ming tian
  
  Hope it helps

  My hanyu pinyin not that good.
  
  I translated it directly instead.
  
  day after day passed, in the blink of an eye, a year had gone by
  reply lies in the distant tomorrow
  
  hope u understand
• starblue

  20 May 05, 09:43

  Originally posted by Kenashi:

  My hanyu pinyin not that good.
  
  I translated it directly instead.
  
  day after day passed, in the blink of an eye, a year had gone by
  reply lies in the future tomorrow
  
  hope u understand

  ok, now i understand... hmmm... is that a song lyric???
• RaTtY81

  20 May 05, 09:48

  dan1 ni3 li2 kai1 wo3 wo3 cai2 zhi1 dao4
  ni3 zai4 wo3 xin1 zhong1 de4 zhong4 yao4 xing4
  wo3 men2 shuo1 fen1 shou3 de4 na4 yi4 tian1
  wo3 de4 shi4 jie4 che4 di3 de4 shui4 le4
  fen1 shou3 zhi1 hou4 wo3 yi4 zhi1 xiang2 ni3
  xi1 wang4 ni3 neng2 hui2 dao4 wo3 sheng1 bian1
  dan4 wo3 zhi1 dao4 zhe4 shi4 bu4 ke3 neng2 de4
  shuo3 wei4 wen4 shi4 jian1 qing2 wei2 he2 wu4
  nan2 dao4 zhe4 jiu4 shi4 ai4 qing2 zhen1 li3
  
• Kenashi

  20 May 05, 09:49

  Originally posted by starblue:

  ok, now i understand... hmmm... is that a song lyric???

  no, just something out of my head