Nay... Just uttering nonsense whenever something hits me...Originally posted by DeadPoet:Getting better Devil1976.
But still ...
Maybe I should arrange for an informal chit chat session on poetry writing one of these days.Originally posted by Devil1976:Nay... Just uttering nonsense whenever something hits me...
It's one of my ways to 'release' myself....
Not 'climbing' at the moment yet.. Though I think I really should be starting soon if I really love poetry... But there's just some things in life.... Still I'm figuring and striking up my balanced steps before I shall walk further...?
That would certainly be cool...? If I can understand what you people are talking about that is....?Originally posted by DeadPoet:Maybe I should arrange for an informal chit chat session on poetry writing one of these days.
Originally posted by Devil1976:Yo you suppose to be feeling powerful today you know! This is your day!
[b]666
On the 6th June '06.
My head's been giving me aches.
Reminding me of the days I've been alive...
Reminding me of the days I've sat....
On a wheelchair like a cripple.
Like my kind without wings and tied dead.
I do wish to get out of bed.
On the floor, a crawling meat.
Searching for signs of duties,
a holy list which awaits....
To give me a reason why I still breathe.
To give me a reason why I crawled out of bed?
To give me a new sense of direction?
Am I made of the number '6'?
Or am I just dead?[/b]
'Suppose', that's the weird part about life... Your thoughts just stray from one side to another... Then you'll need to recollect yourself again...Originally posted by DriftingGuy:Yo you suppose to be feeling powerful today you know! This is your day!
Ok la you win liao lor.. reply also so poeticOriginally posted by Devil1976:'Suppose', that's the weird part about life... Your thoughts just stray from one side to another... Then you'll need to recollect yourself again...
Anyway... You're partially right about 'powerful'... Though it's more like a calm quiet sea... A potential one which I have not yet been able to feel its stirs and waves...
Thoughts... Though not sorted out fully... Have been lined out for the past few days....
Poems just make our lives so much more beautiful... Don't ya think...? And guess what..?? It comes WITHOUT COLORS... "Originally posted by DriftingGuy:Ok la you win liao lor.. reply also so poetic
Originally posted by Devil1976:my dear, why walk path alone? so poor?
Path alone
[b]I walk on this street haunted
by the spirits.
They don't talk, they
just watch,
lurking in the corners..
With their eyes they glared at me.
So silently
I can hear the tick on my watch.
So endlessly time seems to mock.
Yet I can't struggle even if they lay their icy fingers on me..
My heart pounding furiously
towards a dream that leads down the dark alley.
The audience seems everywhere but yet again
it seems like just me.
The windows and shops that I passed,
showing a weird being smuggling himself
across the building.
He has no eyes. Dark is his heart and world.
He has no legs. He just drifted along the cold chilling wind.
Until memories bring him back again,
on the spot he was
glued to.
For a moment he thought he was dead.
Separated entity from his body.
Yet they don't see him as one of them.
Yet he is none.
Yet he find no lodging from the long night.
And the dark day which spells eternity.
Yet he find no tears on his cheek.
The face on which the howling wind would gladly wipe the tears off him.
He has no life, yet not dead.
He is deprived, yet of nothing.
On this street he walks,
glued to the spot.
He can run, he can panic
like a hysterical man yet
he is just not being himself.
He is afraid of the dark,
yet this is his world.
His kingdom and his call.
They longed for his touch.
Cheering him on,
bow upon his 'grace'.
Midnight.
Here comes a 'Cinderella'.[/b]
Originally posted by Devil1976:
A broken toy
[b]A piece of leg
never meant to be fixed.
A limb.
Too lame.
Charred face with a hole on the cheek.
Tears dripped,
sunk in deep.
Lovely hand
with no fingers,
helpless to the world around us.
Look at me.
I looked at you with one eye.
Look at me.
Am I pretty?
I think it's my lousy dress.
My mum never bother to sew anything for me.
Look at me.
But don't touch me.
A piece of chunk never so appealing.
Don't try to move me
or I'll just break into pieces.
So tiny I'll be,
you'll never get to see me again?
Look at me.
But don't tease me.
Look.
I didn't mean to scare you with such an ugly sight.
Perhaps I should just return to my dark old closet?[/b]
Do you sometimes think about this world you live in...?Originally posted by Missing:my dear, why walk path alone? so poor?
Originally posted by Devil1976:And I guess sometimes that can make us one of the greatest fools as well...?
[b]My greatest kind of Love
My noble type of love
is selfishness mixed with despair.
It's about me not
being lonely.
It's about me not being a spare.
My most excellent form of reasonings come from
a strings excuses buried within my head.
That when I said "I love you",
I don't even see you there.
My lame moves came from a muffled mind,
perfected with the finest touches.
To serve a purpose with no sensory
feels but just gratification,
a cheat on its own.
The greatest thought I've ever possessed is just one moment
in my life
where
I was awake
and by your side.
That I understood I would regret but I betrayed myself
to you.[/b]