untitled.. warning : quite crap
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wounds will heal
but scars always remain
friends are but fleeting,
source of comfort,
source of pain
alone in the world
to live, to die
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cross post from another thread. written in reply to a post. just something that came as i replied. again unpolished.. am too lazy to think about depth, how it sounds etc. feel free to comment criticise edit, etc
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not qualified to comment...
me suck at poetry...
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i also suck at poety. to me it is just a i like or don't like the poem kind of thing.. no point super technically cheem poem but only the writer understandOriginally posted by s|nNeD:not qualified to comment...
me suck at poetry... -
my version... kekekeeOriginally posted by the_don:
Time passes,
wounds heal
but scars remain.
friends are but fleeting,
source of comfort,
source of pain
alone in the world
to die, a relief
to live, a strain
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and don... dun worry lah.... it is your inspiration and your feelings.... definitely not crap... kekeke -
if its sincere and comes from the bottom of the heart, usually it wont be crap.
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Not crap not crap.Originally posted by the_don:
wounds will heal
but scars always remain
friends are but fleeting,
source of comfort,
source of pain
alone in the world
to live, to die
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cross post from another thread. written in reply to a post. just something that came as i replied. again unpolished.. am too lazy to think about depth, how it sounds etc. feel free to comment criticise edit, etc
Writing poems are just like writing diary, letter, story. It is part of your feeling. I don't write diary, so to me poem help me to record down my feeling.
When I read those poems, letters that I've wrote to/for my friends years ago. I am gald that I've wrote it down on paper. They are part of my life.
So when you read this poem 10 years later, you may goes 'Hmm... so that was I how I felt about friendship 10 years ago.' -
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Hmm.. Is this written by you?Originally posted by the_don:
wounds will heal
but scars always remain
friends are but fleeting,
source of comfort,
source of pain
alone in the world
to live, to die
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cross post from another thread. written in reply to a post. just something that came as i replied. again unpolished.. am too lazy to think about depth, how it sounds etc. feel free to comment criticise edit, etc -
i like your version too
Originally posted by KittynMeow:my version... kekekee
and don... dun worry lah.... it is your inspiration and your feelings.... definitely not crap... kekeke -
i agree... usually i get inspirations when i'm at the extremes of emotions.. well maybe in 10years i'll look back and laughOriginally posted by DeadPoet:Not crap not crap.
Writing poems are just like writing diary, letter, story. It is part of your feeling. I don't write diary, so to me poem help me to record down my feeling.
When I read those poems, letters that I've wrote to/for my friends years ago. I am gald that I've wrote it down on paper. They are part of my life.
So when you read this poem 10 years later, you may goes 'Hmm... so that was I how I felt about friendship 10 years ago.' -
yes it is written by me. it was something i wrote as a reply to someone..Originally posted by Devil1976:Hmm.. Is this written by you?
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Can we have more of your poems?
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i used to write down my feelings in form of poem, then illl tear them away the next time i see them. dun recall, dun wish to recall.
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take it as a form of writing.. to brush up ur language skills..
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i don't write well leh.... plus i usually get my inspirations when i am at my low points in life...Originally posted by DeadPoet:Can we have more of your poems? -
same here, esp when I fall 'out of love'.Originally posted by the_don: i don't write well leh.... plus i usually get my inspirations when i am at my low points in life...
