1st attempt
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write.. and keep writing
read what Charles Bukowski said about it in my post of his work here ==> Charles Bukowski on writing
keep at it
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what the heck? dew-plee-kate
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ermm kinda a bit difficult... i am just a newbie... maybe i will try think of one some of these days i will will post it if i can as soon as possible, not sure i am taking part. No need to register now rite?Originally posted by DeadPoet:By the way Hocklex, want to join the 'competition'?
Just for fun and get the experience of writing a poem without using the letter 'e'.
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wat is that?Originally posted by the Bear:what the heck? dew-plee-kate -
Originally posted by Hocklez:who know? mooku? wahaha
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Gomen double post again
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got competition???Originally posted by DeadPoet:By the way Hocklex, want to join the 'competition'?
Just for fun and get the experience of writing a poem without using the letter 'e'. 
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ya u go see DPS the 'who wanna join topic' i think there is one...Originally posted by MoonIce:got competition??? 
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i like it
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hocklez... *clap clap* good attempt....
Since everyone suggesting their version, here's mine... kekeke
Her Smile
That smile of hers,
Like a candy melting in the mouth.
Diffusing sweetness
that fills the air.
That smile of hers,
Guileless like a newborn
With innocence and truth
that shines so fair
That smile of hers,
Like light in the darkness.
Showers me with warmth
and tender loving care
That smile of hers,
So pure and magical.
Leaves an imprint
deep down My heart, it's forever there. -
Wah, a better version than mine.Originally posted by KittynMeow:hocklez... *clap clap* good attempt....
Since everyone suggesting their version, here's mine... kekeke
Her Smile
That smile of hers,
Like a candy melting in the mouth.
Diffusing sweetness
that fills the air.
That smile of hers,
Guileless like a newborn
With innocence and truth
that shines so fair
That smile of hers,
Like light in the darkness.
Shines forth with warmth
and tender loving care
That smile of hers,
So pure and magical.
Leaves an imprint
deep down My heart, it's forever there.
Hocklez, really you are doing just fine. Each of us have different writing style, make yours the only and one.
Hope to see more of your poems soon. -
Dun like that say lah... everyone's got their strengths... kekeke..Originally posted by DeadPoet:Wah, a better version than mine.
Hocklez, really you are doing just fine. Each of us have different writing style, make yours the only and one.
Hope to see more of your poems soon.
Hocklez... yah.. do write more....