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Out In Somewhere
O how I love to fall in love
To know what it is like
Where I had never felt before
Looking forward, never back
Never the present
But in front of me
C:
Like the tears raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
But when I finally found you
You stand out of my grasp
Out of my circle, but yet within my life
Tantalizing me,
Deepening my sense of contentment
C:
Like the tears raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
Waiting for me to find you
Nowhere to put so start new thread if moderator dun mind yah
heeheee pls comments...
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REFRESH BUTTON
Out In Somewhere
O how I love to fall in love
To know what it is like
Where I had never felt before
Looking forward, never back
Never the present
But in front of me
C:
Like the tears raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
But when I finally found you
You stand out of my grasp
Out of my circle, but yet within my life
Tantalizing me,
Deepening my sense of contentment
C:
Like the tears raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
Waiting for me to find you
Nowhere to put so start new thread if moderator dun mind yah
heeheee pls comments... -
Originally posted by MoonIce:
[b]Out In Somewhere
O how I love to fall in love
To know what it is like
Where I had never felt before
Looking forward, never back
Never the present
But in front of me
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
But when I finally found you
You stand out of my grasp
Out of my circle, but yet within my life
Tantalizing me,
Deepening my sense of contentment
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
Waiting for me to find you
nice one!
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This very day . . .
By the rain, I sitÂ…
Feeling the freshness of raindrops
And the scent of leaves
I_ breathe_ in the(te) air
By the table, I sitÂ…
Munching my brownie
And thousands of voices I heardÂ…
I_ tasteÂ… and listenÂ… to the(te) mingling sounds_
Bt the wind, I sitÂ…
Wondering about what to do
And millions of thoughts passing by
I_ wonderÂ… where I shall goes from here onward
By your side, I sitÂ…
Thinking of the future ahead
Imagining this and that
I_ dreamÂ… of the times ahead
Breathing__________
Tasting and Listening ______
Wondering_________
Dreaming__________
Is what I would do this very day
*Repeat (faster)
Dreaming__________
Is what I would do this very day
Dreaming__________
Is what I would do this very day
This very day
Na___ ne___ la___ le___ ___ ___ -
wat song?
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oh...mi darling so sweet
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I am Croco, Croco am I -
orginal ones lehOriginally posted by Master -_-:wat song? 
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[quote]Originally posted by sgboy2004:
[b]oh...mi darling so sweet
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no more comment i need some comment to correct leh
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bad in comment...
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wait for the boss here to comment ba...I no good in poetry.Originally posted by MoonIce:no more comment i need some comment to correct leh 
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not really poem loh supposed to be song but actually composed out of some poem im my soul yahOriginally posted by Bochupi:wait for the boss here to comment ba...I no good in poetry. 
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[quote]Originally posted by MoonIce:
[b]Out In Somewhere
O how I love to fall in love
To know what it is like
Where I had never felt before
Looking forward, never back
Never the present
But in front of me
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
But when I finally found you
You stand out of my grasp
Out of my circle, but yet within my life
Tantalizing me,
Deepening my sense of contentment
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
Waiting for me to find you
Remind me of the song 'Somewhere out there'.
Questions: Are you looking for your love? Or you already have someone in mind but she is out of your reach?
I like your C, very lovely, very romantic. But what is 'teas'? Is it tears? If it is tears, 'raining on me' will sound a bit strange. Unless you are like crying out of control (happened to me before), your face covered with tears.
Hope you won't mind. Just my comment. -
Me no boss lah. Anyone can comment lah.Originally posted by Bochupi:wait for the boss here to comment ba...I no good in poetry.
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Originally posted by MoonIce:
Sound like a song written for Faye Wong.
[b]This very day . . .
By the rain, I sitÂ…
Feeling the freshness of raindrops
And the scent of leaves
I_ breathe_ in the(te) air
By the table, I sitÂ…
Munching my brownie
And thousands of voices I heardÂ…
I_ tasteÂ… and listenÂ… to the(te) mingling sounds_
Bt the wind, I sitÂ…
Wondering about what to do
And millions of thoughts passing by
I_ wonderÂ… where I shall goes from here onward
By your side, I sitÂ…
Thinking of the future ahead
Imagining this and that
I_ dreamÂ… of the times ahead
Breathing__________
Tasting and Listening ______
Wondering_________
Dreaming__________
Is what I would do this very day
*Repeat (faster)
Dreaming__________
Is what I would do this very day
Dreaming__________
Is what I would do this very day
This very day
Na___ ne___ la___ le___ ___ ___
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A very strong sense of consciousness, as if you are in the middle of meditation.
Although there are ‘thousands of voices’ and ‘millions of thoughts’, but you seems to be at peace with yourself. Very ‘Zen’ kind of poem. Good work!
HmmÂ… are you a nature lover? -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:
heck spell wrong liao *correcting*
[quote]Originally posted by MoonIce:
[b][b]Out In Somewhere
O how I love to fall in love
To know what it is like
Where I had never felt before
Looking forward, never back
Never the present
But in front of me
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
But when I finally found you
You stand out of my grasp
Out of my circle, but yet within my life
Tantalizing me,
Deepening my sense of contentment
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
Waiting for me to find you
Remind me of the song 'Somewhere out there'.
Questions: Are you looking for your love? Or you already have someone in mind but she is out of your reach?
I like your C, very lovely, very romantic. But what is 'teas'? Is it tears? If it is tears, 'raining on me' will sound a bit strange. Unless you are like crying out of control (happened to me before), your face covered with tears.
Hope you won't mind. Just my comment.
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Originally posted by DeadPoet:
heck spell wrong liao *correcting*
[quote]Originally posted by MoonIce:
[b][b]Out In Somewhere
O how I love to fall in love
To know what it is like
Where I had never felt before
Looking forward, never back
Never the present
But in front of me
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
But when I finally found you
You stand out of my grasp
Out of my circle, but yet within my life
Tantalizing me,
Deepening my sense of contentment
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love Â… Â… Â…
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere Â…
Waiting for me to find you
Waiting for me to find you
Remind me of the song 'Somewhere out there'.
Questions: Are you looking for your love? Or you already have someone in mind but she is out of your reach?
I like your C, very lovely, very romantic. But what is 'teas'? Is it tears? If it is tears, 'raining on me' will sound a bit strange. Unless you are like crying out of control (happened to me before), your face covered with tears.
Hope you won't mind. Just my comment.
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Originally posted by DeadPoet:
Remind me of the song 'Somewhere out there'.
Questions: Are you looking for your love? Or you already have someone in mind but she is out of your reach?
keke looking out for someone worthy of mine heart. nope so far seem to fall in love but always shy
I like your C, very lovely, very romantic. But what is 'teas'? Is it tears? If it is tears, 'raining on me' will sound a bit strange. Unless you are like crying out of control (happened to me before), your face covered with tears.
well just like a chorus need something to rhy with loh but was like tears of loneliness...
Hope you won't mind. Just my comment.
nope comeing from you gonna be like treasures...
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Originally posted by DeadPoet:Sound like a song written for Faye Wong.
A very strong sense of consciousness, as if you are in the middle of meditation.
Although there are ‘thousands of voices’ and ‘millions of thoughts’, but you seems to be at peace with yourself. Very ‘Zen’ kind of poem. Good work!
HmmÂ… are you a nature lover? in the middle of mediation 
i do mediate sometimes when i need to calm down...
lolx it was sort of was raining on dat day me was in the sch canteen den i so bored den write this
'zen' kind yah
nature lover yeh i m
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wah... impressed impressed...
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Originally posted by KittynMeow:wah... impressed impressed...
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In my 1st year in NYP I was very bored
when the idea of composing songs or poems come to my mind and i ask frenz/classmates around for a word and from this idea produce my poems and song further on later ... cont'd
Word: Purity-Pure
Is love pure?
With all its ups and downs
There are jealousy and contention there
One never knew what up in store for us.
Although my love for you may not be pure,
at least I can tell you that,
my love for you is true however impure it is. -
Time to let go
How I think of you
Do you truly care
For I know
My heart for is all you want from me
As time go by
I realize that we grew apart
Moment by moment, day by day
And itÂ’s then I know
What you truly feel for me
And I finally make up my mind to make a clean break with you
C:
OÂ… leÂ…
How I cry
Not for you
But for myself
For how long it took for me
To know you
Whol-ly
Whose mistake was it
Was it me or you
I wouldnÂ’t know
But I do wonder sometimes
As I sat thinking of the times
We spent together
But itsÂ’ time to let go
And so I relive every moment
We spent together for the last time
C:
OÂ… leÂ…
How I cry
Not for you
But for myself
For how long it took for me
To part with you
Whol-ly
And now is the time to part
To start anew -
Was looking out of the huge windows in class when this come to mind yah
Evening Blue
The sun had set
Yet it is not yet darkness
Instead it is blue gradually darkening
And growing dimmer and dimmer
The stars are out too
Who say they shine only when all is dark
In the dim blue sky
the stars glow struggling to give off lights
Which are dear to us
Out there in the darkening sky
the moon shone brilliantly like a pearl
All too fast, the sky changed
From blue to dark blue
And from dark blue to darkness
Still the moon and starts lighten up the sky
So it is not total darkness
To have seen the blueness turn to dark
Is a wondrous way of Mother Nature showing us one of her many beauty and face