The Black Cat's Cauldron
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kekeke... me not as big a fan of star wars as other shows mah... kekekeOriginally posted by True_Xerion:pay u back leow & now u owe me 8 more answers
TX
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hehehe...here's a revised version of a poem I've previously posted.... revised it cos wanted to dedicate it to me bf... so changed some words and put it on a card...
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Love, You
Large bright eyes, intelligent and clear,
Seeing through my shield of insecurity and fear
Soothing words, truthful and sincere
Melting away the defenses that guard my heart dear
Steady arms, comforting and strong
Assuring me that with you around, nothing goes wrong
Gentle touch, caring and tender
Mending the scars that past hurts rendered
A loving heart, enduring and forgiving
Loving one whose heart that has been grieving
A stroke of fate put us in each otherÂ’s way
And loving you, with all I can give everyday
This life, you have made unique with a spark
By leaving on my heart your loving mark. -
Originally posted by KittynMeow:
This is very refreshing. I am not sure if I should said that, but I think it is better than the one you posted on 21 Feb 2004.
hehehe...here's a revised version of a poem I've previously posted.... revised it cos wanted to dedicate it to me bf... so changed some words and put it on a card...
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[b]Love, You
Large bright eyes, intelligent and clear,
Seeing through my shield of insecurity and fear
Soothing words, truthful and sincere
Melting away the defenses that guard my heart dear
Steady arms, comforting and strong
Assuring me that with you around, nothing goes wrong
Gentle touch, caring and tender
Mending the scars that past hurts rendered
A loving heart, enduring and forgiving
Loving one whose heart that has been grieving
A stroke of fate put us in each otherÂ’s way
And loving you, with all I can give everyday
This life, you have made unique with a spark
By leaving on my heart your loving mark.
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More love poems from you please. -
yup... a poem abt love... but i think not exactly the way DeadPoet imagined it....
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My Love
Across the room, on a fateful day
Your gaze and mine crossed each otherÂ’s way
A pleasant smile, a shy hello
Within a while we talked like no tomorrow
The ringing phone made me spin with joy
Knowing you have called, IÂ’m so thrilled, oh boy.
Our first movie, and a popcorn we shared
On that first date, a kiss you dared
Down the street, we walked hand in hand
Dreaming of aims, hopes and a love thatÂ’ll never end
On ValentineÂ’s, you pledged you were mine
With roses and a diamond ring, you proposed as we dined
In happiness, the wedding was planned
I thought IÂ’ve finally found my man
With all my heart, I devoted to do
Everything I thought that would be pleasing to you.
To give you a surprise, I paid you a visit
But there is more to you than I know, is it?
In between the sheets, were you on our bed
Another woman to whom, love you made
My world crashed, my heart was broken
I trusted in you, and all the words youÂ’ve spoken
Angry tears flowed, maddening thoughts in my mind
The lesson of betrayal taught me how much I was blind
You asked for forgiveness, admitting you were wrong
But despite years of being together, our love was not strong
You said you loved her, that woman named Laurie
And you couldnÂ’t come back, that you were sorry.
Too hurt to hear, too sad to reply
All I could do was look at you and cry
Packing my belongings, I took my leave
Hoping to pick up the pieces and heal from my grief
A long time it will take for me to trust
But get on with life, to do that I must
To you and Laurie, I can only say
Wish you all happiness and love the rest of your days. -
*sob* tissue pls.....................
then again if it's me, the poem might turn really violent............. -
*me hands tissue to tare*Originally posted by tare:*sob* tissue pls.....................
then again if it's me, the poem might turn really violent.............
No... no... put down that parang.... put it dooowwwnnn..... calm down okie... kekeke -
Originally posted by KittynMeow:
OMG, i hope this wasn't inspired or based on a true story of yours? I'd have done more, lots more than assume gallantry and wish them well
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My Love
Across the room, on a fateful day
Your gaze and mine crossed each otherÂ’s way
A pleasant smile, a shy hello
Within a while we talked like no tomorrow
The ringing phone made me spin with joy
Knowing you have called, IÂ’m so thrilled, oh boy.
Our first movie, and a popcorn we shared
On that first date, a kiss you dared
Down the street, we walked hand in hand
Dreaming of aims, hopes and a love thatÂ’ll never end
On ValentineÂ’s, you pledged you were mine
With roses and a diamond ring, you proposed as we dined
In happiness, the wedding was planned
I thought IÂ’ve finally found my man
With all my heart, I devoted to do
Everything I thought that would be pleasing to you.
To give you a surprise, I paid you a visit
But there is more to you than I know, is it?
In between the sheets, were you on our bed
Another woman to whom, love you made
My world crashed, my heart was broken
I trusted in you, and all the words youÂ’ve spoken
Angry tears flowed, maddening thoughts in my mind
The lesson of betrayal taught me how much I was blind
You asked for forgiveness, admitting you were wrong
But despite years of being together, our love was not strong
You said you loved her, that woman named Laurie
And you couldnÂ’t come back, that you were sorry.
Too hurt to hear, too sad to reply
All I could do was look at you and cry
Packing my belongings, I took my leave
Hoping to pick up the pieces and heal from my grief
A long time it will take for me to trust
But get on with life, to do that I must
To you and Laurie, I can only say
Wish you all happiness and love the rest of your days. -
This is really good.
No, no, I mean the poem, not the story.
Very well writen. In a few lines from a potential happy marriage to a sudden realization of the bitter truth.
Although this is sad. But I think it is good to know what kind of guy he really is before it is too late.
Take care.
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hahaha... no worries....
Glad you guys enjoyed it...
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Like having a good cup of coffee, it is always a pleasure to read a great poem.Originally posted by KittynMeow:hahaha... no worries....
Glad you guys enjoyed it... -
After not writing for a couple of weeks... here's a feeble attempt to start... keke
Phone Call
The twinkle in your eye,
That wistful smile,
You break into a grin
as you looked at the dial
With a gentle voice
You answered the phone
Saying sweet nothings
in a tender tone
The cheer of your laugh,
The joy on your face,
The bliss of being in love
Seem all melded in one place
A gentle goodbye
And a promise to meet
You ended your call
As you heard the sound of my feet
Who is it?
Who can it be?
For you were never so happy
if the call were from me
With a sad tear,
With heartbreaking sigh,
Realisation dawned
on this blunt mind
That for some time,
Someone else has come
to take that place
in your heart that was mine. -
*sob sob*
just curious, which is worse to you (in general)? betrayal of the body or the heart?
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frankly i don't know which is worse... think I won't be able to live with either one...Originally posted by tare:*sob sob*
just curious, which is worse to you (in general)? betrayal of the body or the heart? 
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Run to you
When skies are blue yet I feel dark clouds loom,
When all light shines yet my hope just fades,
When the days go on even though my love is gone
I want to run to You.
When smiles are given but tears flow deep,
When sweet dreams elude and gone was sleep
When memories of pain render me insane
I want to run to You.
When all seems fair but I feel despair
When loveÂ’s promise breaks like my heart pierced with stakes
When with sweet lies death does tempt
I want to run to You.
With faithful love, my fears, You waived
With merciful grace, my wrongs, You forgave
With healing kindness, my hurts, You embraced
IÂ’m forever thankful I ran to YOU. -
Originally posted by KittynMeow:
Short and sweet!
After not writing for a couple of weeks... here's a feeble attempt to start... keke
[b]Phone Call
The twinkle in your eye,
That wistful smile,
You break into a grin
as you looked at the dial
With a gentle voice
You answered the phone
Saying sweet nothings
in a tender tone
The cheer of your laugh,
The joy on your face,
The bliss of being in love
Seem all melded in one place
A gentle goodbye
And a promise to meet
You ended your call
As you heard the sound of my feet
Who is it?
Who can it be?
For you were never so happy
if the call were from me
With a sad tear,
With heartbreaking sigh,
Realisation dawned
on this blunt mind
That for some time,
Someone else has come
to take that place
in your heart that was mine. [/b]
I really like your writing style, maybe you should write a story in poetic forms, maybe a love story or something like that. -
Originally posted by KittynMeow:
YOU
[b]Run to you
When skies are blue yet I feel dark clouds loom,
When all light shines yet my hope just fades,
When the days go on even though my love is gone
I want to run to You.
When smiles are given but tears flow deep,
When sweet dreams elude and gone was sleep
When memories of pain render me insane
I want to run to You.
When all seems fair but I feel despair
When loveÂ’s promise breaks like my heart pierced with stakes
When with sweet lies death does tempt
I want to run to You.
With faithful love, my fears, You waived
With merciful grace, my wrongs, You forgave
With healing kindness, my hurts, You embraced
IÂ’m forever thankful I ran to YOU.
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GOD??? -
hee hee... so clever....Originally posted by DeadPoet:YOU GOD??? -
My oh my,... kitty! I love ur poems!!
Well done.. keep them coming!! -
thank you thank you.... will try whenever i have time or feel inspired... kekeeOriginally posted by oceanic:My oh my,... kitty! I love ur poems!!
Well done.. keep them coming!! -
Walking Away
There you were, walking alone
Eyes looking down, intent on your phone
Oblivious and unknowing
Of the emotions that were flowing
That the sight of you has in my heart grown.
Here I stand, rooted to the ground
Watching your every move, fearing I would be found
Anxious and divided
Should I greet you? IÂ’m undecided
And like hammers my heart began to pound.
Then she comes, running to you
With looks of happiness, coloring her hue
Overjoyed and excited
Walking with you, she looks delighted
As you shower her with love so true
Silently I turned, moving away
Merging into the crowd, without delay
Regretful yet satisfied
That you found true love at your side
Afterall, I was the one who strayed -
Originally posted by KittynMeow:
gulp, so sad, so sad.........
[b]Walking Away
There you were, walking alone
Eyes looking down, intent on your phone
Oblivious and unknowing
Of the emotions that were flowing
That the sight of you have in my heart grown.
Here I stand, rooted to the ground
Watching your every move, fearing I would be found
Anxious and divided
Should I greet you? I? undecided
And like hammers my heart began to pound.
Then she comes, running to you
With looks of happiness, coloring her hue
Overjoyed and excited
Walking with you, she looks delighted
As you shower her with love so true
Silently I turned, moving away
Merging into the crowd, without delay
Regretful yet satisfied
That you found true love at your side
Afterall, I was the one who strayed
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oh is it?? didn't mean for it to be sad.... thought it was more an expression of the kind of feeling one would get seeing an ex finally being happy in a new relationship...Originally posted by True_Xerion:gulp, so sad, so sad......... -
ya but the girl who strayed ... feels to me like she's changed for the better? She's obviously still in love with him but dares not muster the courage to approach him for fear of her past? so sad so sad .......Originally posted by KittynMeow:oh is it?? didn't mean for it to be sad.... thought it was more an expression of the kind of feeling one would get seeing an ex finally being happy in a new relationship... -
aww... *pat pat*... dun cry ok?? otherwise down here flooded... kekeOriginally posted by True_Xerion:ya but the girl who strayed ... feels to me like she's changed for the better? She's obviously still in love with him but dares not muster the courage to approach him for fear of her past? so sad so sad ....... -
not bad not bad
part of life somemore
more more
/me waits n waits patiently