something i just wrote

• the_don

  6 Feb 04, 17:11

  a day
  
  another day has passed
  got out of bed
  
  tears form
  heart aches
  head hurts
  anger builds
  
  cry, there's no reason
  love, i can do without
  alone, shall i want
  friends, transient
  
  teardrop fell
  heartache sore
  head blurs
  anger dissipates
  
  masks ready, sheathing
  another day has begun
  
  (created 6 feb 2004. 5:05pm)
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  another unpolished piece.. i just let it flow and see where it went. . no title yet, any suggest, comments, flames?
  
  (editted to add title)
• Devil1976

  6 Feb 04, 17:19

  Hmm... How about just calling it 'a day'?
• the_don

  6 Feb 04, 17:28

  Originally posted by Devil1976:

  Hmm... How about just calling it 'a day'?

  hum.. i like that.. shall add it in