Er... just wondering.Originally posted by oceanic:The clear blue sky
Cooling wind
Tranquility
Fills me so
Running against time
My thoughts
As still as a rock
Numbness, I feel
Panting and sweating profusely
The wind's still cooling
My thoughts are gone
Numbness, no more
i mean my thoughts ah..Originally posted by DeadPoet:Er... just wondering.
How can u be still as a rock and panting and sweating profusely at the same time?![]()
oic. Paiseh paiseh.Originally posted by oceanic:i mean my thoughts ah..![]()
This poem reminds me of some shots from those locally produced short movies. Cool.Originally posted by oceanic:I ran unusually fast
The pain was there
My mind was in a dilema
My heart was heavy...
My knee was hurting
I was still running
I wish I could escape easily
Just by running away
I saw the same old man
Sitting under the same tree
I sensed his loneliness
I began to feel tears welling in my eyes
It's time to go back again
Back to the same old house
The same problems I'll faced
And perhaps the same feelings of sadness again
Another day,
I'll run again at the same place
And see the same old man wearing a white shirt with a straw hat
Sitting quietly at one corner
Perhaps someday, I'll choose to walk away from what I have to face....
Originally posted by DeadPoet:This poem reminds me of some shots from those locally produced short movies. Cool.![]()
Hey starblue for Chinese poem, do check out this siteOriginally posted by starblue:sigh.... this forum doesnt support chinese... can't put my chinese poem here. well... if anyone happen to be interested, msg me.
sigh... tough luck...