my poems

• Yunhaier

  29 Mar 04, 01:52

  Originally posted by oceanic:

  thank u..
  
  u know me huh? sean goh's my fren in school

  I dunno you personally lar don't worry, apart from being forum mate.
  
  Cheers
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 06:16

  Originally posted by Yunhaier:

  I dunno you personally lar don't worry, apart from being forum mate.
  
  Cheers

  so ya from tp?
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:19

  Haiku
  
  The smiles displayed
  The joy revealed
  Hearts aches deeply
  Soul is yearning
  
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:22

  Haiku
  
  Life, a mystery to be revealed
  Journey, an ending to life
  Possessions, never satisified
  Contentment, you should try
• Bontakun

  29 Mar 04, 18:32

  Yr poem izzit abt some1 in particular? I cant seem to relate yr poems to some thing NOT of R/S... still hurt? If U dun mind can tell me. I can give U a listening ear.
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:43

  Originally posted by Bontakun:

  Yr poem izzit abt some1 in particular? I cant seem to relate yr poems to some thing NOT of R/S... still hurt? If U dun mind can tell me. I can give U a listening ear.

  thanks... no one in particular.. all based on past experiences appreciate ur reading
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:46

  Haiku
  
  Destructive forces
  Deceptive Temptations
  Resistance, a stone throw's away
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:48

  Haiku
  
  Calling out your name
  The heart's in confusion
  Stay or leave, it's my decision
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:52

  Haiku
  
  Waiting
  Time had slipped away swiftly
  The end, I lost my precious beloved
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:54

  Haiku
  
  Sky's dark
  Mind's blank
  A loner's day
  
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 18:58

  Haiku
  
  Music soothes the soul
  Reading widens the mind
  Writing reveals the heart's desires
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 19:07

  Haiku
  
  Water, precious and essential
  An endless need for it
  Or, we'll never be here.
  
  P/S: sounds a bit weird...
• Bontakun

  29 Mar 04, 19:20

  Originally posted by oceanic:

  thanks... no one in particular.. all based on past experiences appreciate ur reading

  NP. Juz dun hang on it too deeply. Life is not juz abt experiencing love btwn a guy & a gal... Its more den dat.
  
  Juz remember: live life to da fullest & live it happily.
  
  FUMO!!!!!!
• oceanic

  29 Mar 04, 20:28

  Originally posted by Bontakun:

  NP. Juz dun hang on it too deeply. Life is not juz abt experiencing love btwn a guy & a gal... Its more den dat.
  
  Juz remember: live life to da fullest & live it happily.
  
  FUMO!!!!!!

  thanks!
• DeadPoet

  30 Mar 04, 01:10

  Hey sis, your new avatar looks so serious.
  
  Need some times to get used to it.
  
  P.S. Please read the thread on Haiku for more inspirations.
• oceanic

  30 Mar 04, 06:24

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Hey sis, your new avatar looks so serious.
  
  Need some times to get used to it.
  
  P.S. Please read the thread on Haiku for more inspirations.

  hehehe
• oceanic

  30 Mar 04, 20:27

  Haiku
  
  Exhaustion
  Irritation
  Where's my inspiration and determination?
• oceanic

  31 Mar 04, 14:23

  Breathless
  The seed of love had overwhelmed me
  Your tender touch
  Aroused my inner soul
  
  The loving eyes
  Pierce through my thoughts
  Those moments
  Everlasting till eternity
  
  
• DeadPoet

  1 Apr 04, 02:10

  Originally posted by oceanic:

  Breathless
  The seed of love had overwhelmed me
  Your tender touch
  Aroused my inner soul
  
  The loving eyes
  Pierce through my thoughts
  Those moments
  Everlasting till eternity
  
  

  Sexy! Love at first sight?
• oceanic

  1 Apr 04, 05:49

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Sexy! Love at first sight?

  Hmm sadly no leh.. e words juz came
• oceanic

  2 Apr 04, 15:26

  Like a child,
  He cried and whined
  Unrestrained emotions
  The tears simply couldn't stop
  
  The loss was too great
  Her demise was like the roaring rain
  Memories preserved
  Remincising the past was simply an endless cycle
  
  Too much of her in his mind
  His heart aches so much it almost died
  Crying again in this lonely night
  Only her presence could soothe his cries.
• oceanic

  2 Apr 04, 17:03

  Real joy are not hidden
  It comes naturally
  Brings a smile on your face
  And warms your heart almost in an instant
• Devil1976

  2 Apr 04, 17:23

  What is modern poem?
  
• Devil1976

  2 Apr 04, 17:27

  What is modern poem?
  
• oceanic

  2 Apr 04, 17:27

  Originally posted by Devil1976:

  What is modern poem?
  

  erm.. wat u mean?