my poems
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REFRESH BUTTON
here's mine.. but it's at this URL..
sorry a bit lazy to copy n paste...
http://novia.com.sg/forums/index.php?showtopic=2905 -
REFRESH BUTTON
here's mine.. but it's at this URL..
sorry a bit lazy to copy n paste...
http://novia.com.sg/forums/index.php?showtopic=2905 -
Okay, I will go and take a look. Thanks.
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wow... felt your pain reading through wat you wrote... i hope you are better now.... there will be sunshines after the rain
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You guys must check this out. Worth it.Originally posted by oceanic:here's mine.. but it's at this URL..
sorry a bit lazy to copy n paste...
http://www.luvvivi.com/bbs/index.php?showtopic=53 -
serious???Originally posted by DeadPoet:You guys must check this out. Worth it. -
i'm fineOriginally posted by the_don:wow... felt your pain reading through wat you wrote... i hope you are better now.... there will be sunshines after the rain
thanks don some were based on my emotions n some were based on my inspirations 
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Yup. There are really many talented people at Blue Butterfly Café, including you. Everytime I read the poems there I feel emotionally touched.Originally posted by oceanic:serious???
Frankly speaking, I am not very familiar with modern style poems. The poets that I studied are from the old school. But to me, poetry is a way to express your inner feeling, so old school or new school does not really matters.
I can't really write, but I love to read. So I can't really call myself a poet, maybe a poet at heart, but not a poet at work. (Beside, I have only a few 'poems' to my name)
Have anyone here read any story written in poetic form. These are very difficult to find. Any good recommendation do let me know. Thanks. -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:Yup. There are really many talented people at Blue Butterfly Café, including you. Everytime I read the poems there I feel emotionally touched.
Frankly speaking, I am not very familiar with modern style poems. The poets that I studied are from the old school. But to me, poetry is a way to express your inner feeling, so old school or new school does not really matters.
I can't really write, but I love to read. So I can't really call myself a poet, maybe a poet at heart, but not a poet at work. (Beside, I have only a few 'poems' to my name)
Have anyone here read any story written in poetic form. These are very difficult to find. Any good recommendation do let me know. Thanks.
thanks!! all i can say is poetry is sth tat comes from within
n for me, i write only when that kind of feeling comes
still quite new and dunno much abt poems though -
Keep writing, don't stop. Once you put down your pen it will be difficult to pick it up again.Originally posted by oceanic:
thanks!! all i can say is poetry is sth tat comes from within
n for me, i write only when that kind of feeling comes
still quite new and dunno much abt poems though
I've been trying to write something for the past few days, but nothing come out. I've stop writing for over 10 years, and now I am having a hard time trying to come out with something good.
Sigh.......
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i dun write everytime. poetry comes from the heart, the mind and e soul.. No point forcing myself if i just can't write.. n i hope e same goes for u as well.. just dun force urself too hard..Originally posted by DeadPoet:Keep writing, don't stop. Once you put down your pen it will be difficult to pick it up again.
I've been trying to write something for the past few days, but nothing come out. I've stop writing for over 10 years, and now I am having a hard time trying to come out with something good.
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Memories
I dreamt of you last nite
I feel you close
But before I could hold you,
you vanished without a seal
How I wish it was real
And things were back to normal
Like the days we first met
So sweet and hard to forget
Memories still lingers
Forever it will stay
Cos' I know
you are still the one i love most -
In memory of my beloved Grandfather whom I missed and love and always will
A black umbrella lying at a corner
Unused,untouched for a decade
Unknown mysteries behind
Only we'll know why
The day you went away
Tears never stopped flowing then
Like a trampled rose on the ground
You lost the battle, somehow
Anniversary is here again
The years passed by simply too fast
Our longing for you each day
Never cease to pause even for a while -
Night time had drawn near
Mysteries began to unfold
Tears started to fill those sunken eyes
Emotions began to ran wild
Loneliness crept inside her soul
She yearn for something that wasn't meant for her at all..
Forcing the thoughts away
She tried so hard in dismay
Yearning for an end
Soon, was what she hoped for
Tears came again
Knowing the end will bring her pain -
Thanks oceanic, I am glad to see the three poems here. Can put it in HOI so that I can read them again and again.
I was really moved when I read the poem about your grandfather. Both my grandparents passed away about two years ago. I still miss them very much.
When I read the first line ‘A black umbrella lying at a corner’, I instantly fell in love with this poem, memories of my grandparents began to appear, I was speechless.
Thanks for sharing and bringing back the memories.
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hiya brother.. thanks for ur comments..Originally posted by DeadPoet:Thanks oceanic, I am glad to see the three poems here. Can put it in HOI so that I can read them again and again.
I was really moved when I read the poem about your grandfather. Both my grandparents passed away about two years ago. I still miss them very much.
When I read the first line ‘A black umbrella lying at a corner’, I instantly fell in love with this poem, memories of my grandparents began to appear, I was speechless.
Thanks for sharing and bringing back the memories. glad my poems did stirred up sth in someone's mind :0
everyone tke care!! i'll come in whenever i can! -
Same to you. Hope to see you really soon.Originally posted by oceanic:hiya brother.. thanks for ur comments.. glad my poems did stirred up sth in someone's mind :0
everyone tke care!! i'll come in whenever i can! -
I never knew it'll turn out this way
I wished it was better that way
Since things had came such a way
I am glad I've decided to walk away
Never knew u'll ask me to stay
Since I already made up my mind that day
Never thought I'll still be so insane
To simply choose to stay -
Nothing seemed to ease the pain
The heartache deep within
The disappointment again i faced
Tears welled up in my eyes
I tried so hard to hide
My heart's in pain
So pain.. I felt really dazed..
Will all these go away?
How long will it take?
I can't seem to endure anymore
Heading back to my room
I broke down once again
No one knows
Only Heaven knows how i really felt deep inside. -
I never seemed to find e right words
To describe how this special feeling developed
I wonder why did i ever chose this path
It's simply a choice I've made so far
Many times I felt like letting go
Tears always accompany whenever things go wrong
I wonder how long this would carry on
If only I could just leave once and for all -
The lost soul emerged after the storm
It cries with such intense emotions
Yet no one knows
Strong and determined
Somehow weak and vulnerable deep within
Her inner soul tells her to let everything go
The images of what happened flash before her again
She remembers it vividly
She knows, she'll never forget what she saw
Though the heart aches
Though the pain might never cease
She told herself, it's still better to let go
The day will come soon
Where the memories will forever lingers within the soul
The pain will be gone when e soul is gone -
*sob sob*....Originally posted by oceanic:The lost soul emerged after the storm
It cries with such intense emotions
Yet no one knows
Strong and determined
Somehow weak and vulnerable deep within
Her inner soul tells her to let everything go
The images of what happened flash before her again
She remembers it vividly
She knows, she'll never forget what she saw
Though the heart aches
Though the pain might never cease
She told herself, it's still better to let go
The day will come soon
Where the memories will forever lingers within the soul
The pain will be gone when e soul is gone
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????Originally posted by KittynMeow:*sob sob*....
just a poem
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A poem that touches other's heart.Originally posted by oceanic:????
just a poem
hehe
Just curious, how come most of your poems got no titles one leh? -
This poem...Originally posted by oceanic:The lost soul emerged after the storm
It cries with such intense emotions
Yet no one knows
Strong and determined
Somehow weak and vulnerable deep within
Her inner soul tells her to let everything go
The images of what happened flash before her again
She remembers it vividly
She knows, she'll never forget what she saw
Though the heart aches
Though the pain might never cease
She told herself, it's still better to let go
The day will come soon
Where the memories will forever lingers within the soul
The pain will be gone when e soul is gone
Remind me of one of Kitty's poem. Maybe same theme but totally different writing styles. Cool.
Can anyone guess which Kitty's poem I am referring to?