something else that i wrote...

• the_don

  4 Feb 04, 06:04

  is Love just a cruel joke?
  
  Is love
  a synonym for pain?
  an instrument of deceit?
  a drug to blind reason?
  a scalpel to rip out hearts?
  
  Is love just a cruel joke?
  
  (created: 24th Apr 1:58am)
  
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  this is my very first piece, again pretty unpolished state. i guess all can see where my inspiration cames from. any comments, flames, etc are welcomed
  
• Danisdead101times

  4 Feb 04, 06:09

  love is not that cruel as you think bah...?
• True_Xerion

  4 Feb 04, 06:14

  love is the blade that cuts the deepest, hurts the most and takes longest to heal ...
  
  then again love is the sweetest thing that can heal all other wounds.
  
  what a mess ehh?
  
• Danisdead101times

  4 Feb 04, 06:29

  Originally posted by True_Xerion:

  love is the blade that cuts the deepest, hurts the most and takes longest to heal ...
  
  then again love is the sweetest thing that can heal all other wounds.
  
  what a mess ehh?
  

  sure it is a mess loh....
• Imperfect

  5 Feb 04, 00:57

  Originally posted by the_don:

  is Love just a cruel joke?
  
  Is love
  a synonym for pain?
  an instrument of deceit?
  a drug to blind reason?
  a scalpel to rip out hearts?
  
  Is love just a cruel joke?
  
  (created: 24th Apr 1:58am)
  
  ---------------------------------------------------
  
  this is my very first piece, again pretty unpolished state. i guess all can see where my inspiration cames from. any comments, flames, etc are welcomed
  

  it depends on the two persons that are involved in it... sigh...
• the_don

  5 Feb 04, 02:38

  Originally posted by True_Xerion:

  love is the blade that cuts the deepest, hurts the most and takes longest to heal ...
  
  then again love is the sweetest thing that can heal all other wounds.
  
  what a mess ehh?
  

  yes it is... funni eh?
  
  i use to say :
  " to taste life at its sweetest, one must swallow its most bitter pill"
• the Bear

  5 Feb 04, 02:39

  if we do not dare risk everything for love, is it love?
• True_Xerion

  5 Feb 04, 02:56

  Originally posted by the Bear:

  if we do not dare risk everything for love, is it love?

  To risk all for love is foolhardy, to risk anything less than all is, .... blasphemy.
  
  For when but one beacon lights the way, love resides at nights' edge.
• True_Xerion

  5 Feb 04, 02:58

  Originally posted by True_Xerion:

  To risk all for love is foolhardy, to risk anything less than all is, .... blasphemy.
  
  For when but one beacon lights the way, love resides at nights' dwimmering edge.

• tia

  5 Feb 04, 03:06

  nice poem u got dere..
  use to tk lit in sch..
  dun like to make my own poem...
  =D
• the_don

  5 Feb 04, 05:23

  Originally posted by the Bear:

  if we do not dare risk everything for love, is it love?

  sometimes to love means wanting the best for the other. even if it means to leave..
  
  (seem no relation to your comment but wat the heck)
• the_don

  5 Feb 04, 05:25

  Originally posted by True_Xerion:

  To risk all for love is foolhardy, to risk anything less than all is, .... blasphemy.
  
  For when but one beacon lights the way, love resides at nights' edge.

  true... u are beginning to astonish me... your angmoh si bei cheem ah!!!!
• the_don

  5 Feb 04, 05:26

  Originally posted by tia:

  nice poem u got dere..
  use to tk lit in sch..
  dun like to make my own poem...
  =D

  thank you tia.. i use to take lit too but sucked at it. writing poems is not my hobby either, but for some unknown reason this just flowed out of me when i was in the pits of love-hell.
• Danisdead101times

  5 Feb 04, 05:31

  Originally posted by True_Xerion:

  hao shi hao shi....