Something i wrote....
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Questions
why
why is my world so confused
why does my heart go its own way
why is the road to happiness paved with pain
why it hurts more to love than to be loved
is
is it so difficult to want no heartache
is it so impossible to do what my heart desires
is it selfish to want to be loved
is it a myth that love lasts forever
(created: Thu Jul 3, 2003, 7:18 AM)
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this is just something i wrote in a spur of a moment, didn't polish up or re-write it (virgin state
). not sure if this is classified as poetry since i don't even know the defination of that word. any comments, flames, thumbs up, thumbs down is welcomed. 
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Not bad for a spur of a moment, I usually have to crack my head for days to come out with one poem.Originally posted by the_don:Questions
why
why is my world so confused
why does my heart go its own way
why is the road to happiness paved with pain
why it hurts more to love than to be loved
is
is it so difficult to want no heartache
is it so impossible to do what my heart desires
is it selfish to want to be loved
is it a myth that love lasts forever
(created: Thu Jul 3, 2003, 7:18 AM)
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this is just something i wrote in a spur of a moment, didn't polish up or re-write it (virgin state ). not sure if this is classified as poetry since i don't even know the defination of that word. any comments, flames, thumbs up, thumbs down is welcomed.
Anyway for me poetry is just a form of expression. Everyone can do it, don't care what the text book said. (Tear text book) -
Originally posted by the_don:
Questions
why
why is my world so confused
why does my heart go its own way
why is the road to happiness paved with pain
why it hurts more to love than to be loved
is
is it so difficult to want no heartache
is it so impossible to do what my heart desires
is it selfish to want to be loved
is it a myth that love lasts forever
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love
for the heart must bear
all hurts for a better love
sun brings blossoms pure
precious
that which endures time
must pass through devils torment
myth becomes legend
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hee hee, something i wrote to assuage the_don's pain,
dun cry too hard ok? time heals. or so they say ... -
true:
wow... thanks.... i don't know what to say... or write.
on a lighter note:-
your angmoh powerful siah!!!! i read a few times, check dictionary, crack head then catch da ball. zhen ren bu luo xiang leh *nudge nudge*
deadpoet:
thanks for the compliment. i don't usually write such stuff. it was just some one off thing.... "xian chou le". -
Originally posted by the_don:
simi powerful? used simple words wat?!?! that was a feeble attempt at western-style trad haiku; 5-7-5. decided to try answering your verse hee hee .... dun laff too hard lol all who read it k?
[b]true:
wow... thanks.... i don't know what to say... or write.
on a lighter note:-
your angmoh powerful siah!!!! i read a few times, check dictionary, crack head then catch da ball. zhen ren bu luo xiang leh *nudge nudge* -
cheemz....
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pain
when emotions sour
it hurts so much you wonder
where it'd such power..
courage
the sun after rain
comes when you conquer the pain
you learn love again
love
pays reason no heed
fills up your every need
is PRECIOUS indeedOriginally posted by True_Xerion:
love
for the heart must bear
all hurts for a better love
sun brings blossoms pure
precious
that which endures time
must pass through devils torment
myth becomes legend
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hee hee, something i wrote to assuage the_don's pain,
dun cry too hard ok? time heals. or so they say ...
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HateOriginally posted by the Bear:love
pays reason no heed
fills up your every need
is PRECIOUS indeed
to know the deepest dark
'yond loves' tender redemption
boy hugs his lost toy -
erhmz.. i had to use a dictionary to understand wat u wrote.. guess that means my angmoh cannot make itOriginally posted by True_Xerion:simi powerful? used simple words wat?!?! that was a feeble attempt at western-style trad haiku; 5-7-5. decided to try answering your verse hee hee .... dun laff too hard lol all who read it k?
wah... haiku i never try before... wat you wrote is good
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so true...Originally posted by the Bear:pain
when emotions sour
it hurts so much you wonder
where it'd such power..
courage
the sun after rain
comes when you conquer the pain
you learn love again
love
pays reason no heed
fills up your every need
is PRECIOUS indeed
woww.... so many wo lin gao shou here... -
time 2 stop hijacking this thread lol don, ur turn to post more stuff old or new!!
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LostOriginally posted by True_Xerion:Hate
to know the deepest dark
'yond loves' tender redemption
boy hugs his lost toy
Letting go, eyes closed
free falling, heart a breaking
shattered, faith truth love -
wah...too chimz... *ciaoz....