My First Poem (Repost from Aunt Agony thread)
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My first poem here...
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How alluring, seductive is her look,
Residing in my deepest dreams.
She torments and teases my every me,
As wild as my imagination may be.
Someone help me control myself, please!
Her soothing composure calms me,
Her presence deeply excites and stirs me!
O What contrasting feelings I experience!
I am spell bounded and captivated by her every she.
How smooth and fair is her pure white skin,
Much like an angel I have once seen.
Yes! She was the angel in my dreams,
Stirring my uncontrollable emotions it seems!
I wish the angel to be by my every side, every moment.
Her absence invokes emptiness in me.
Her eyes are of a bottomless depth...
Which I could just stare into for eternity.
I am being bored into, pierced to my very heart when our eyes meet.
Overwhelmed by emotions, my heart beats wildly and head spins.
O But I love these feelings which drive me wild!
They say one would never know how grass yearns for the morning sun.
Starving all night and eager in anticipation at sunlight's first sight.
Now I know! Now I feel...
Her rays radiate and brighten up my every life,
Illuminating the darkest in me!
I yearn to give love to my angelic sunshine,
Of genuine sincerity and of pure love I present thee.
My love has never been stronger than I feel,
The flutter of my heart, emotions coursing through me.
All I ask is...
Will thou accept thy humble me? -
You mean this is your first poem? i.e. the first poem that you wrote?
From the look of it, it seems that you have some experiences in writing poems before writing this.
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This is my first here i mean. I do have some poems which i write in my diary but some too personal. See what I can share. I once wrote a poem for my ex which was read on Class95 as a dedication.
No fixed moment n time to write.. But juz need the inspiration for the words to flow... it's very important...
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Yup, inspiration is very very important. I will be trying to get find some inspiration too.Originally posted by MetalGear:This is my first here i mean. I do have some poems which i write in my diary but some too personal. See what I can share. I once wrote a poem for my ex which was read on Class95 as a dedication.
No fixed moment n time to write.. But juz need the inspiration for the words to flow... it's very important...
I will be posting some other topics here beside Lit topics because I think Lit lovers like us are very rare nowadays.
We also need time to come out with good poems. -
my vocab and engrish in general not good enuff to allow me to write poems.
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You are too humble my friend. You do not have to use very 'deep' words to write poem want.Originally posted by wuming78:my vocab and engrish in general not good enuff to allow me to write poems. -
hey it's good!
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thank you....Originally posted by Coco_Coco:hey it's good!