I finally did it...
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In memory of a girl who loved the sea and me. For the sea and the star are distance apart, and never should be together. Marking the end of a friendship..
I phoned her up and told her not to bother about the gifts,
I told her that I'm sick and tired of being placed in between the rifts.
I said I'm tired of listening to all her excuses and reasons,
All of them were just lies and painful lessons.
I don't care what she promises for the future,
Because I don't see myself in that picture.
This time I asked her to let me go,
Even if the tears were to roll.
It doesn't matter anymore for me, it doesn't matter anyway,
Since she could just leave it there to come again and go away.
She might have said 'I love you' one more time,
And now it is just a sound that rings in my mind like a chime.
A beautiful note that is pleasing to hear,
Yet it reminds me of a nightmare and my fear.
This time I told her not to come back,
To go her own journey and leave me in my track.
She loves the sea and takes after it,
Like the torrents, she swept me ashore on our first meet.
Yet, the tides lowered and she left me alone,
On a note so high that I could not forget the tone.
Three years and we were there before,
Sharing everything that we both adore.
And I finally did it after so long,
To put an end to this sad love song. -
you wrote this?
If you did, you just won my admiration. Well, it is just me but ...
Keep on writing...
i.c.y -
Wrote this today after calling her up...Originally posted by icyprincess:you wrote this?
If you did, you just won my admiration. Well, it is just me but ...
Keep on writing...
i.c.y
Feel so sad.... but at least the burden is gone.
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nice
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u girl or boy ah, then girl and girl = ???? -
Up to you to guess..Originally posted by Lavendin:u girl or boy ah, then girl and girl = ????
Anyway I'm feeling better right now.
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you did it.
it makes me sad.
life goes on mate. -
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everyone needs to move on.Originally posted by Nelstar:Wrote this today after calling her up...
Feel so sad.... but at least the burden is gone.
I felt sad the day I chose to break off our friendship too...but I guess it is really easier this way and I have moved on faster than I expected...No point keeps dragging on if you know it doesn't have a future...
We are all here to support you! Have a good cry and then move on
i.c.y -
x2 this is realllly good...Originally posted by icyprincess:you wrote this?
If you did, you just won my admiration. Well, it is just me but ...
Keep on writing...
i.c.y
anyway, hope u feel better now.
since its been dragging so lg, u finally did it, so try to put it behind u n move on... -
No worries, it's over.
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To my love
You leaned over and you kissed me
I felt my knees go weak
You leaned over and you kissed me
I couldn't even speak
You leaned over and you kissed me
With a passion flowing free
You leaned over and you kissed me
Sparks flew that we could see
You leaned over and you kissed me
A touch so soft and tender
You leaned over and you kissed me
A kiss I would remember
You leaned over and you kissed me
I'm sure I kissed you back
You leaned over and you kissed me
With the fire no kiss should lack
You leaned over and you kissed me
You left me wanting more
You leaned over and you kissed me
My soul you did explore
You leaned over and you kissed me
My heart no longer full of pain
You leaned over and you kissed me
Darling, kiss me once again -
how cheap, every 1 line there will be a line that u dont have to figure out the rhyme.Originally posted by Killer Tomatoes:To my love
You leaned over and you kissed me
I felt my knees go weak
You leaned over and you kissed me
I couldn't even speak
You leaned over and you kissed me
With a passion flowing free
You leaned over and you kissed me
Sparks flew that we could see
You leaned over and you kissed me
A touch so soft and tender
You leaned over and you kissed me
A kiss I would remember
You leaned over and you kissed me
I'm sure I kissed you back
You leaned over and you kissed me
With the fire no kiss should lack
You leaned over and you kissed me
You left me wanting more
You leaned over and you kissed me
My soul you did explore
You leaned over and you kissed me
My heart no longer full of pain
You leaned over and you kissed me
Darling, kiss me once again
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Originally posted by Nelstar:In memory of a girl who loved the sea and me. For the sea and the star are distance apart, and never should be together. Marking the end of a friendship..
I phoned her up and told her to return me all my gifts,
I told her that I want her to placed me in between the rifts.
I said I like listening to all her excuses and reasons,
All of them were just true and fruitful lessons.
I don't care what she promises for the future,
Because I see her in my picture being torture.
I pretend asking her to let me go,
And I force 2 drops of tears to roll.
It doesn't matter anymore for me, it doesn't matter anyway,
Since she could just leave it there to come again and go away.
She might have said 'I love you' one more time,
And now it is just a sound that rings in my mind like a chime.
A beautiful note that is pleasing to hear,
Yet it reminds me of a nightstand and my flirt.
This time I told her not to come back,
To go her own journey and leave me with my neck.
She loves the sea and takes after it,
Like the torrents, she swept me ashore on our first meet.
Yet, the tides lowered and she left me alone,
On a note so high that I could not forget the tone.
Three years and we were there before,
Sharing everything that we both adore.
And I finally did it after so long,
To put an end to this funny love song.
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wah lan eh. u oso wanna be evil?Originally posted by F.O.S: -
oops didn't know you hereOriginally posted by Nelstar:wah lan eh. u oso wanna be evil? -
Ah Nel....i dropped my glasses while reading wat u wrote....but erm...serious la....u wrote tt meh?? dun lie to ah cind hor...
hmm...i tot u happy patoring now...y sudden sadness leh......u ok bo??? buddy buddy....anything....call me wor.... -
Please look at the date and time of post wor...Originally posted by cindtan29:Ah Nel....i dropped my glasses while reading wat u wrote....but erm...serious la....u wrote tt meh?? dun lie to ah cind hor...
hmm...i tot u happy patoring now...y sudden sadness leh......u ok bo??? buddy buddy....anything....call me wor....
And strange to see me write poem meh?
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wow..kaozz....who the si bei eng one...so long thread still dig out knn....siow bo!!!Originally posted by Nelstar:Please look at the date and time of post wor...
And strange to see me write poem meh?
of cos strange tat u can write poems and also dun expect so gd som more wor...ah cind regret ....see u no up hor..... -
Hmmmm this is like only a short piece... and it's written within a short time with inspiration...Originally posted by cindtan29:wow..kaozz....who the si bei eng one...so long thread still dig out knn....siow bo!!!
of cos strange tat u can write poems and also dun expect so gd som more wor...ah cind regret ....see u no up hor.....
I do write long poems.. but i dont post them in forums. -
very good lor....too bad....u are taken liao....ah cind no chance....hehehe...weel done !!!
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wah.... pressure...Originally posted by cindtan29:very good lor....too bad....u are taken liao....ah cind no chance....hehehe...weel done !!! -
hee hee..hi shinta ............pleasure from???Originally posted by shinta:wah.... pressure... -
pressure from u lo..Originally posted by cindtan29:hee hee..hi shinta ............pleasure from??? -
haha...no preasure la......i auntie....how to compare to you....dun worry....Originally posted by shinta:pressure from u lo..
Ask ah nel to give u PLEASURE.....