Im getting intellectual....
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[b]Walking on the road
I do not know where I am heading
I know I want to go somewhere
But my mind is closed to me
As I sit at the bus stop
I wonder which bus I should get on
When one came
I just got on without much thought
It was a short ride
To a place where I was familiar with
I went to my favourite fast food restaurant
And I got my favourite drink
But I still felt lost
'Cos I did not know why I was there
I sat and I stared
I still couldn't figure out
Why I was there
People walked past
I hoped that someone would come to me
And give me an answer
Let me know what I was doing
Why I was doing it
And how I could do it
I left the place
With a million questions in mind
Questions with answers
Answers not clear to me
Why? -
Originally posted by Stefanism:[b]Walking on the road
I do not know where I am heading
I know I want to go somewhere
But my mind is closed to me
As I sit at the bus stop
I wonder which bus I should get on
When one came
I just got on without much thought
It was a short ride
To a place where I was familiar with
I went to my favourite fast food restaurant
And I got my favourite drink
But I still felt lost
'Cos I did not know why I was there
I sat and I stared
I still couldn't figure out
Why I was there
People walked past
I hoped that someone would come to me
And give me an answer
Let me know what I was doing
Why I was doing it
And how I could do it
I left the place
With a million questions in mind
Questions with answers
Answers not clear to me
Why?
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juz a poem of wad i was doing todae...
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nice poem..
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congrats on your new found poetic intelligence....
we'll be seeing more of ya works in Writers' Haven perhaps?
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if u wan me to be more depressed...Originally posted by narz:congrats on your new found poetic intelligence....
we'll be seeing more of ya works in Writers' Haven perhaps?
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seems u r feeling down n donno wat to do like tat.......Originally posted by Stefanism:juz a poem of wad i was doing todae... 
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hehe, no mah...Originally posted by Stefanism:if u wan me to be more depressed...
haha
but it is true that one often gets inspired during times of depression.... so do make positive use of those creative waves while you're "depressed"...
don worry, it's just a phase we all go through, you'll snap out of it soon, with all your fella siansters cheering you on! -
Agree on that........ once a while you will always have this thing gg onz...... for me it would really come to me and stick it there and make ya feel sick and etc...... wonder if it is depression or izit juz do not know what to do in life and know what you want achieve ........ hope i don get it back againz.....
/me shiverz ~